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©2003-2009 ~ravenworld
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sitting in front my pc listening to musik and started drawing after 51 minutes it was

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:iconsweetkitten:
And people say the girls *I* draw are skinny. :D The expression is good. The arms could use some work, but aren't bad. The clothing and folds are very nicely done. The legs need work, too. You've got some really nice anatomy in the upper torso, but I think you could do a better job on the legs, just from looking at the rest of the lines in this image. This could be a really nice drawing. Man, though... she's way too skinny. She doesn't have room for all her organs! ;-)
:iconburkina:
very nice line work, although she is way out of proportion.. i would giver a little bit more around the waist and some more "arse", if you spent another 50 mins on this it could become a very swish peice
:iconravenworld:
yeah i know there are something that i can do better but i did it from 0:00 to 0:50 and so it is real good for a tiered man or not
:iconsweetkitten:
I'm not saying it's bad... just that maybe instead of emphasizing how long it took, you might take a few more minutes to make this really impressive.
:iconravenworld:
hm you are right so i do perhaps you can take a look at my other works too
:iconravenworld:
hm take a look at my gallery and you can see what i can do and what not
:iconravenworld:
hm yea your right but if you take a look at my gallery you can see what i can do and what not
:iconskwish-e:
Her right halter strap appears to be quite a bit wider than the left one. Other than that, pretty good on the shirt.
:iconravenworld:
i noticed it but then it was to late to change cause i already scaned it then and supmited it but i like it really much

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